Monday, 16 May 2016

Hokey pokey ice-cream


Hokey pokey poem

Hokey pokey ice-cream caramelized cruncy bits.
Flavours pop in your mouth as you bite them.
All mixed in with plain old ice-cream.

By Kieran.

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3 comments:

  1. Unknown18 May 2016 at 19:42

    I like this Kieran, it's short and sweet - just like the ice-cream. Remember to use commas. Good descriptive words.

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  2. Mr Corlett18 May 2016 at 19:44

    Hi! Kieran,
    Mum's comment sums it up - Listen to your mother :-)

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  3. Anonymous26 June 2016 at 14:33

    Cool poem good font.

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